{"id":1839,"date":"2016-12-22T10:00:05","date_gmt":"2016-12-22T10:00:05","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.qualaroo.com\/?p=1839"},"modified":"2025-08-26T05:36:23","modified_gmt":"2025-08-26T05:36:23","slug":"the-science-of-website-copywriting-tips-from-david-ogilvy","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/web-staging.qualaroo.com\/blog\/the-science-of-website-copywriting-tips-from-david-ogilvy\/","title":{"rendered":"The Science of Website Copywriting: Tips from David Ogilvy"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Most people think David Ogilvy became one of the most successful ad men of all time because of his artistic, creative talent. But in reality, he was successful because he treated copywriting like a science.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-1841\" src=\"https:\/\/qualaroo.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/12\/creative-genius.jpg\" alt=\"creative-genius\" width=\"698\" height=\"249\" \/><\/p>\n<p>Before he became the \u201cOriginal Mad Man,\u201d Ogilvy was a researcher. He <a href=\"http:\/\/www.ogilvy.com\/About\/Our-History\/David-Ogilvy-Bio.aspx\">worked with George Gallup<\/a> (founder of the Gallup Poll) to study human behavior, and some of his insights on nationalism were even used by Eisenhower to direct war strategy.<\/p>\n<p>In studying human behavior, Ogilvy learned about how we think\u2014and how we can be persuaded. His research background is what made him so good at creating ad copy, and his techniques can make you great, too. You don&#8217;t even need to run an ad campaign to learn from him\u2014we&#8217;ll teach you how to apply his research-driven techniques to your website copy.<\/p>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"The_Original_Mad_Mans_Method_for_Customer-Driven_Copy\"><\/span>The \u201cOriginal Mad Man&#8217;s\u201d Method for Customer-Driven Copy<span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<blockquote><p><i>Advertising people who ignore research are as dangerous as generals who ignore decodes of enemy signals. &#8211;<a href=\"https:\/\/blog.kissmetrics.com\/david-ogilvy\/\">David Ogilvy<\/a><\/i><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>The stakes for making compelling website copy on the first try are high. You&#8217;ve spent tons of time and money marketing your site. If potential customers leave when they don&#8217;t connect with your copy, all those resources were wasted.<\/p>\n<p>You wouldn&#8217;t ignore <a href=\"https:\/\/qualaroo.com\/blog\/what-does-customer-insight-mean\/\">customer insights<\/a> (analytics, feedback, etc.) when making important product decisions\u2014and you can&#8217;t ignore them in your marketing. Without a customer-driven strategy, your work is directionless.<\/p>\n<p>But your website copy doesn&#8217;t need to be guesswork. According to the Father of Advertising, <a href=\"https:\/\/blog.kissmetrics.com\/david-ogilvy\/\">researching these elements<\/a> will turn copywriting into a science\u2014where you can succeed over and over again. The three elements of his method are:<\/p>\n<ol>\n<li><b>Who <\/b>you&#8217;re writing for.<\/li>\n<li><b>How <\/b>that person thinks.<\/li>\n<li><b>What <\/b>that person needs.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p>Let&#8217;s walk through each element of the process.<\/p>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"The_Who_Decide_Your_Target_Audience_to_Maximize_Conversions\"><\/span>The Who: Decide Your Target Audience to Maximize Conversions<span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<blockquote><p><em>Don&#8217;t count the people that you reach. Reach the people who count. &#8211;<a href=\"http:\/\/www.azquotes.com\/author\/11051-David_Ogilvy\"> David Ogilvy<\/a><\/em><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>Deciding <b>who<\/b> your target audience is should be the driving force behind your copy<b>. <\/b>You can use research to figure out both who you&#8217;re already writing for, and who you want to be writing for.<\/p>\n<p>Luckily, you don&#8217;t have to do it alone. These are some of our favorite tools for gathering insights into <b>who <\/b>is visiting your site.<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><b><a href=\"https:\/\/fullstory.com\/features\">FullStory<\/a> <\/b>identifies your visitors and lets you <a href=\"https:\/\/blog.fullstory.com\/5-tips-for-improving-user-onboarding-with-fullstory-faea06e2283#.aapyuvvr0\">play back their sessions<\/a> on your website like a DVR.<\/li>\n<li><b><a href=\"https:\/\/clearbit.com\/reveal\">Clearbit<\/a> <\/b>can give you demographic information from just an email address and turn anonymous website traffic into sales leads.<\/li>\n<li><b><a href=\"https:\/\/qualaroo.com\/\">Qualaroo<\/a> <\/b>provides on-site surveys that can collect email addresses and information of your choice.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Tools like these can help you figure out who&#8217;s visiting your site and what they&#8217;re doing there\u2014but it&#8217;s up to you to take action on those insights. Here&#8217;s how productivity tool <a href=\"https:\/\/beta.idonethis.com\/login\">I Done This<\/a> did.<\/p>\n<h3>How I Done This Changed Their Website Copy from Target Audience Insights<\/h3>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/qualaroo.com\/blog\/how-i-done-this-used-qualaroo-to-dramatically-improve-their-conversion-rates\/\">I Done This used Qualaroo<\/a> to discover who on their site was converting to their free trial\u2014and used the results to change their website copy. Most of their conversions came from people who wanted to use the tool for individual productivity, even though they wanted to target the (more profitable) team productivity customers.<\/p>\n<p>When I Done This realized the discrepancy between who they <i>wanted <\/i>to speak to and who they <i>were <\/i>speaking to, they changed their copywriting strategy. They were trying to speak to teams, and yet the word \u201cteam\u201d wasn&#8217;t clearly featured on their site. Here&#8217;s what their sign-up page looks like now:<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-1842\" src=\"https:\/\/qualaroo.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/12\/team-idonethis2.png\" alt=\"team-idonethis2\" width=\"772\" height=\"451\" \/><\/p>\n<p>[<a href=\"https:\/\/qualaroo.com\/blog\/how-i-done-this-used-qualaroo-to-dramatically-improve-their-conversion-rates\/\">source<\/a>]<\/p>\n<p>In this sign-up page, they put the word \u201cteam\u201d in the header, the graphic, and in the smaller body of text. With three mentions of the word \u201cteam,\u201d two of which are in bold, it&#8217;s much clearer who I Done This is speaking to\u2014and it showed in their conversions.<\/p>\n<p>Make your target audience the <b>driving force behind your copy. <\/b><i>You <\/i>know why they should use your product<i>, <\/i>and now they know, too.<\/p>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"The_How_Persuade_Your_Customers_By_Walking_in_Their_Shoes\"><\/span>The How: Persuade Your Customers By Walking in Their Shoes<span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<blockquote><p><em>The consumer isn&#8217;t a moron. She&#8217;s your wife. You insult her intelligence if you assume that a mere slogan and some vapid adjectives will persuade her to buy anything. &#8211; <a href=\"https:\/\/postcron.com\/en\/blog\/david-ogilvy-7-commandments-advertising-marketers-need-know\/\">David Ogilvy<\/a><\/em><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>Once you figure out <b>who <\/b>your customer is, you need to research <b>how <\/b>they think. To do that, you have to walk in their shoes. Like Ogilvy points out, you insult their intelligence if you think they&#8217;ll be persuaded by merely a catchy slogan.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cMarketing copy\u201d is your enemy. If your copywriting <a href=\"https:\/\/www.brainpickings.org\/2013\/08\/21\/elmore-leonard-10-rules-of-writing\/\">sounds like copywriting<\/a>\u2014instead of how your customers speak and think\u2014you need to re-write it.<\/p>\n<p>We spoke to Len Markidan, Head of Marketing at <a href=\"https:\/\/www.groovehq.com\/\">Groove<\/a>, about how unnatural copy doesn&#8217;t connect with your customers.\u201cI&#8217;ve never heard a software engineer turn to their colleague and say that they wanted an analytics tool that was more &#8216;robust&#8217; and &#8216;flexible,&#8217;\u201d Markidan explained. \u201cBut people still use that kind of copy on their sites.\u201d<\/p>\n<h3>How ReadMe Speaks Their Customers&#8217; Language<\/h3>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/readme.io\">ReadMe<\/a>, an app that makes <a href=\"https:\/\/blog.readme.io\/the-best-rest-api-template\/\">API documentation easy<\/a>, made sure their marketing copy spoke to developers. They used <a href=\"https:\/\/qualaroo.com\/blog\/what-great-marketers-know-about-customer-feedback\/\">surveys and customer success calls<\/a> to check in on what their customers wanted\u2014and in the process, learned more than a little about how they think.<\/p>\n<p>They&#8217;ve applied what they&#8217;ve learned to their website, too. Check out their homepage copy. It says, \u201cBeautiful <b>_<\/b><b>_______ <\/b>made easy,\u201d and what&#8217;s inside that blank changes from \u201cdeveloper hubs\u201d to \u201cAPI references\u201d to \u201cdocumentation\u201d to \u201cdev communities\u201d every few seconds.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-1843\" src=\"https:\/\/qualaroo.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/12\/Screen-Recording-2016-12-16-at-02.31-PM.gif\" alt=\"screen-recording-2016-12-16-at-02-31-pm\" width=\"772\" height=\"438\" \/><\/p>\n<p>This kind of language\u2014the language of developers\u2014speaks right to ReadMe&#8217;s target audience. Only developers call themselves \u201cdev communities,\u201d and only developers really need \u201cAPI references.\u201d The website copy is written in the language that developers think.<\/p>\n<p>In order to write for your audience, <b>you have to think like them<\/b>.<\/p>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"The_What_Earn_Brand_Trust_by_Presenting_a_Solution_Not_a_Product\"><\/span>The What: Earn Brand Trust by Presenting a Solution, Not a Product<span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<blockquote><p><em>Good copy can&#8217;t be written with tongue in cheek, written just for a living. You&#8217;ve got to believe in the product. &#8211; <a href=\"https:\/\/thecreativeham.com\/blog\/david-ogilvy-quotes-make-you-better\/\">David Ogilvy<\/a><\/em><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>After you&#8217;ve figured out <b>who <\/b>your target audience is and <b>how <\/b>they think, you need to consider <b>what <\/b>problem your product solves in their lives. Like Ogilvy says, you can&#8217;t just write your website copy to sell your product. You&#8217;ve got to believe in what it does for your customers.<\/p>\n<p>Your product isn&#8217;t a product\u2014<a href=\"https:\/\/leanstack.com\/your-product-is-not-the-product\/\">it&#8217;s a solution<\/a>. Digital marketing agency <a href=\"http:\/\/www.houseofkaizen.com\/\">House of Kaizen<\/a> explains that your website needs to show customers how your product increases their gains, decreases their pains, or both\u2014otherwise they won&#8217;t be persuaded to buy.<\/p>\n<p>Think of it like a mattress. You could sell a mattress by saying that the right one will give you a better night&#8217;s sleep and make your workday more productive (increases gains). You could also sell one by saying that the right one will get rid of your chronic back pain (decreases their pains).<\/p>\n<p>Both statements are true\u2014when you have a good product, you help your customers. But it&#8217;s your job to <b>make sure customers know how you can help<\/b> in your website copy.<\/p>\n<h3>How Qualaroo and Optimizely Solve Customers&#8217; Problems with Personalization<\/h3>\n<p>For any product or service, there are different types of people who could be looking at your site\u2014and different ways to solve their problems. To optimize problem-solving for every user, <a href=\"https:\/\/help.qualaroo.com\/integrating-qualaroo-survey-optimizely-experiment-ab-test-variations\">Qualaroo and Optimizely came together<\/a> to make website experiences <a href=\"https:\/\/qualaroo.com\/blog\/6-inventive-uses-for-qualaroo\/\">as personalized as possible<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p>Using a Qualaroo survey, you can find out information about a visitor\u2014where they live, for example. Then, using Optimizely&#8217;s integration with Qualaroo, you can take them to a personalized landing page based on that information. So if your visitor is in Southern California, you can take them to a page that offers summer clothes, and if they&#8217;re in Toronto, you take them to a page that offers winter ones.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-1844\" src=\"https:\/\/qualaroo.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/12\/optimizely-personalization.png\" alt=\"optimizely-personalization\" width=\"772\" height=\"419\" \/><\/p>\n<p>[<a href=\"https:\/\/qualaroo.com\/blog\/6-inventive-uses-for-qualaroo\/\">source<\/a>]<\/p>\n<p>Using Qualaroo&#8217;s <a href=\"https:\/\/qualaroo.com\/blog\/how-personalized-onboarding-will-patch-the-biggest-hole-in-your-funnel\/\">branching logic<\/a>, you can create in-depth user personas. You can use those in-depth user personas to help solve your customers&#8217; in-depth, personalized problems.<\/p>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Write_Strong_Copy_Without_Artistic_Genius\"><\/span>Write Strong Copy Without Artistic Genius<span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<blockquote><p><em>Don&#8217;t bunt. Aim it out of the ballpark. Aim for the company of immortals. &#8211; <a href=\"https:\/\/postcron.com\/en\/blog\/david-ogilvy-7-commandments-advertising-marketers-need-know\/\">David Ogilvy<\/a><\/em><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>\u201cAiming it out of the ballpark,\u201d like Ogilvy says you should, doesn&#8217;t require a stroke of artistic genius. You don&#8217;t need luck\u2014you need research. Learning <b>who<\/b> your customers are, <b>how <\/b>they think, and <b>what <\/b>they need should influence every website copy decision you make.<\/p>\n<p>Using Ogilvy&#8217;s three-step process to customer insights gives you a repeatable process for writing copy. When you treat copywriting as a science, rather than an art, you can hit a home run every time.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Most people think David Ogilvy became one of the most successful ad men of all time because of his artistic, creative talent. But in reality, he was successful because he treated copywriting like a science. Before he became the \u201cOriginal Mad Man,\u201d Ogilvy was a researcher. 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